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Craqe - Color - Craqe - 08-09-2010

Color
Beautiful,
Vivid,
Passionate.

Decorating the world with a resonant aura,
Bathing it in a spectral flood,
Bland becomes exciting.

The blue seas give life and refreshment.
The green forests prosper and clothe the land.
The yellow sun sheds renewal and energy.
A planet of pure life is the totality.

Individualizing,
Characterizing,
Differentiating.

Painting personality,
Yet drawing lines between masterpieces;
These lines set a blank canvas to be controlled…

A fight sparked from the red drive of hate,
And geared by the black motivation of power,
Supremacy is the golden desire.
Inferiority is the resulting label of defeat.
Such is racism, and the defining factor is--
--Color.


RE: Craqe - Color - Sam - 08-10-2010

Wow, that had nice meaning. I like the connections between the colours.

(08-09-2010, 11:38 PM)Craqe Wrote: Color
the defining factor is--
--Color.

Some truth about that!

Good job.


RE: Craqe - Color - ucrazii - 08-13-2010

keep this up too, unique and nice.


RE: Craqe - Color - Blue_Social - 08-15-2010

You just keep on writing.
I never post any of my works on here (idk why).
But your stuff is good. GET IT COPYRIGHTED!


RE: Craqe - Color - KronHelp - 08-29-2010

Wow, very good work, the actual colored words really brought the whole piece together. Bravo.