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Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Yin - 08-05-2010
Hatrid
Antipathy is all around,
In our hearts and deep inside our soul.
That one man you look to in disgust;
Your self proclaimed enemy.
No matter the color,
We're all parallel.
We're not going anywhere;
If one part of the orb falls,
We all fall with it.
This hatrid is pointless;
Why not coalesce?
It will never end,
Unless we make an effort.
I did a "Hatrid Ex" one, but this is just about hatrid. Enjoy.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Assists - 08-07-2010
Hey Yin I know something that would make this so much better and that is: if you would read it to us lol that would be sweet ,no but good one thanks for the read!
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Kyuubi - 08-07-2010
Wow, that's good. It flows really well, I like it. Thanks for the share.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Krazy Beast - 08-07-2010
Wow this is really good how long did it take for you to do?
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Yin - 08-08-2010
Took me like a good 30 minutes or so.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Swat Runs Train - 08-08-2010
FYI it is spelled hatred, not sure if that's on purpose or not.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Craqe - 08-09-2010
Well done. A plus is that it flows really well.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Plutonium - 08-09-2010
O_O!?... Wow, That was actually awesome o_O!
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Sam - 08-10-2010
Another good poem from Yin! Thanks for that share, I enjoyed it.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Hatrid - Thomas - 08-10-2010
I read your poem out loud, it just sounds so smooth!