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RE: Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-17-2011
(04-17-2011, 01:27 AM)Calx Wrote: It doesn't flow. I take it english is not your first language?
Thanks for the feedback.
Yeah you r right, english is not my native language.
RE: Burning Desire - Calx - 04-20-2011
(04-17-2011, 02:19 AM)Colonel Wrote: Thanks for the feedback.Just work on our way of putting words together...that way you can place them in a manner which is more artistic than staccato and jarring.
Yeah you r right, english is not my native language.
RE: Burning Desire - BlackChaos - 04-23-2011
This is good
You can improve in grammatical areas, but that isn't always necessary. Just keep writing and don't stop. You'll learn a lot in due time.
RE: Burning Desire - Loukas - 04-23-2011
What kind of music do these lyrics go to?
RE: Burning Desire - Colonel - 04-23-2011
(04-23-2011, 10:29 AM)BlackChaos Wrote: This is good
You can improve in grammatical areas, but that isn't always necessary. Just keep writing and don't stop. You'll learn a lot in due time.
yeah u r right, just keep writing and you will learn a lot.
RE: Burning Desire - Ambition - 04-25-2011
(04-17-2011, 02:19 AM)Colonel Wrote: Thanks for the feedback.
Yeah you r right, english is not my native language.
If you're looking to become an English writer, the best thing you can do is practice. Proper utilization of spelling and grammar can really make-or-break your writing career.
Good Luck!