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RE: A rap I've made. - step down kid - 08-01-2010
It's good, but nothing special.
RE: A rap I've made. - ElectricDreams - 08-01-2010
I like this man! Really cool, well done.
RE: A rap I've made. - Sam - 08-01-2010
I think it's hard to judge the quality without being able to hear it.
RE: A rap I've made. - ElectricDreams - 08-03-2010
(08-01-2010, 04:28 PM)Sam Wrote: I think it's hard to judge the quality without being able to hear it.
I second the motion, however I still like the lyrics.
RE: A rap I've made. - Rhythm - 08-03-2010
It's rather short, and there are some lines that are kind of amateur sounding.
More specifically-
"You messin with my emotions makes me go insane
Wish I could use magic and float away like david blaine"
It needs some work, and needs more cleverness in it. Clever rhymes are what make memorable raps.