Hey all , here is my last work.
Plz rate it , your CnC are welcome
It's not bad. I don't like the blocks in the background..
I don't like the size of the text or the font. I like the main colour theme though.
I think you need to make sure the blocks don't eat into the main render as they seem to have done on her hair.
I like it alot nice work on it I rate it a 10/10 I love the background colors and the way you did it. Nice Job
I really like this . 10/10!
Bad text
Bad blending
No depth
Bad light
No Flow
2/10p
The color scheme is very nice. I agree with xeke about the blocks obstructing the render just a little. I do not like the text though. I feel the pixel font is appropriate, but I think it should be relocated just a little higher. The reflection on the text should be removed. There's a lot of other simple effects you could apply to the text, but I don't think a reflection shows well in this particular image. Keep it simple so it doesn't detract from the rest of the image. The composition feels good, but the sudden break on the bottom right yellow whisp is irritating. I recommend smudging the edges a little so it'll fade off into the black.
8/10 in the image's current state. Good work.
(04-14-2010, 03:08 PM)Uchiha Sasuke Wrote: [ -> ]Bad text
Bad blending
No depth
Bad light
No Flow
2/10p
i see you are the same as on hf ...
(04-14-2010, 03:41 PM)[ Process.xSs ] Wrote: [ -> ]i see you are the same as on hf ...
Why should I change on a different forum?
I don't like to please anybody.