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Good poem, I like it.
I'm starting to enjoy browsing and reading poems by Support Forums members, lol.
How long did this take you to write? Btw, I think you mean 'apart', not 'appart', unless it's intentional.
That is good, try to expand on it!
It takes time to write a good poem. Just, try to make this about three stanzas.
It doesn't make much sense to me, and you should also try adding to it. Maybe add in a few more verses.