(01-21-2012, 08:10 PM)Laugh Wrote: [ -> ]Are you kidding me? How is that thread even relevant? Sad excuse for a human we have here...I'm taking a break from SF.
So you judge me online and say I am a sad excuse for a human?
I really dislike kids like you, but hey every forum has one of those, just go pitch your balls gayboy. I hope you leave the forum.
Anyone else has anything to say?
You ask for opinions and when you get them, you attempt to insult the person criticizing you. You're honestly in no place to be calling anyone a
gayboy. Anyway..like I said I'm taking a break from Support Forums for a little bit.
(01-21-2012, 09:12 PM)Laugh Wrote: [ -> ]You ask for opinions and when you get them, you attempt to insult the person criticizing you. You're honestly in no place to be calling anyone a gayboy. Anyway..like I said I'm taking a break from Support Forums for a little bit.
You taking a break doesn't have anything to do with my thread.
In my opinion, be more insightful. Example;
“You probably could beat them both, if you came back to fight here” she insisted in a stubborn manner.
Now, I don't know if stubborn is what you intended that line to feel as, but I think you catch my drift.
(01-28-2012, 05:49 PM)๖ۣۜNitrous Wrote: [ -> ]In my opinion, be more insightful. Example;
“You probably could beat them both, if you came back to fight here” she insisted in a stubborn manner.
Now, I don't know if stubborn is what you intended that line to feel as, but I think you catch my drift.
A better wording and feel to the dialogue? I will try to make it better, thank you.
I now have finished chapter 2, I will start uploading them soon to somewhere.