It looks decent but it's a low quality image, and looks a little distorted with the noise.
Anyway, I like the background - the text is fairly simple and it's easy enough to create red text using Cinema 4D.
I've seen something similar to this but only it was a .gif and the glass shattered whilst the text floated around.
You should try something like that but for a beginner I think you've done an alright job with it, well done.
It looks as stated above, Low Quality.
if you could arange that it would look perfect.
The font looks pretty bland. Maybe spice it up a bit. Give it some flare.
(don't yell/hurt/kill me D