it was beautiful it made my nipples cry. i love you
It's indeed creative and i like it.
nice one dude like that poem!!! give me more..
Sorry, but that doesn't look that nice. 3/10.
Absolutely beautiful. I agree with the guy who said to record yourself singing/rapping it.
Are you as talented in singing as you are writing?
I think you could do alot better if you wrote about happy stuff.
Just a tip.
It's alright, but I don't know who mixes Poem and Rap?
I like it, is this a true verse? or just something u randomly came up with in ur mind?
I liked it. Do you do poetry often?
This is some beautiful poetry my friend, you should write a book or something. It'd be funny, I like that your poems are about real time stuff and not about love and all that crap!