This was actually a great poem, well done for first
damn really good for a first time!
great poem my friend, well done!
Wow, this is a great first poem. it kick my first poems ass xD
you should send links to your new poems
Nice effort for your first attempt mate I really enjoyed reading It.
Seems like a great poetry since it's your first attempt.
It's a little out of shape, but it's good, nice try though.
That was actually pretty good. Very deep too.
Great Poem man,how long did it take you to write?