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It was pretty nice, could use some more complexity though bigger words, different meanings etc lol.

Its pretty good actually,Keep practicing and you are on the right track.

This is actually very good for a first poem, good job

This is awesome for your first poem.

not bad i would say it was nice.
but nice try i liked it

The scheme of it was pretty good.
You seem to be on the right path .

(09-06-2011, 03:13 PM)Blazin Wrote: [ -> ]It was pretty nice, could use some more complexity though bigger words, different meanings etc lol.

English isn't my first language. It's hard to come up with bigger words, but I'll try.

This is great, I hope you keep it up man! / respect

Great for a first attempt, its really deep stuff lol.

That is very nice. Made me feel like writing some.