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This poem was inspired by recent accomplishment of finding most of my blood family. It means something to me, but leave C&C so I can see your opinions.

Blood,

Thicker than water
Stronger than steel
Greater than time

Like sings to like
Sings through the years
Sings through intertwined hearts
Blood you cannot hear
Blood you can only feel.

It is our life
It is our love
It is powerful

I saw your recent thread and nice poem, really proud of you (no homo).

(07-05-2011, 09:06 PM)jhfire Wrote: [ -> ]I saw your recent thread and nice poem, really proud of you (no homo).

Thank you jhfire that means a lot to me

I liked it a lot. That was a very good poem... Keep up the good work. I think I might add some of mine here.

I like your poem. I like your other poem as well. You seem to put a lot of thought into them, no matter how short they are.

I really like it! I think we have a poet on this forum!

nice !. you are awesome !

Good job dude, small but meaningful poems should have power in the words. That's exactly what you showed here. XD

Congratulations yet again, I saw your other thread. Nice job on the poem!

(07-05-2011, 06:00 PM)Veryx Wrote: [ -> ]Blood,

Thicker than water
Stronger than steel
Greater than time

It's not stronger than steal, if that were true we would never break our bones.

But nice poem.