(07-05-2011, 03:51 PM)SimonLoOo Wrote: [ -> ]This poem is truly meanful, you should do another poem
I just make poems when I have the time and I feel in the mood lol. I'll make one soon though
(07-05-2011, 05:53 PM)Veryx Wrote: [ -> ]I just make poems when I have the time and I feel in the mood lol. I'll make one soon though
Soon please. This one is really good. But not so fast that it loses the artistic-ness behind.
(07-08-2011, 09:15 AM)Mayhem Wrote: [ -> ]Soon please. This one is really good. But not so fast that it loses the artistic-ness behind.
I actually made one right after he said that lol...
[Short Poem] Blood
which you have already read
(07-09-2011, 12:32 AM)Veryx Wrote: [ -> ]I actually made one right after he said that lol...
[Short Poem] Blood
which you have already read
And I loved it. MORE PLEASE!!!
Nice little poem but i love matching words.
Another great poem.
It has a lot of meaning for being only 8 sentences.
I hope to see more work out of you!
(07-09-2011, 07:13 AM)Justin Wrote: [ -> ]Another great poem.
It has a lot of meaning for being only 8 sentences.
I hope to see more work out of you!
Almost every single one of my poems are short
most people like them though
Thanks for feedback
short and meaningful is what I go for.