I wrote a poem for my girlfriend once too I believe and she still loved it even though it was terrible.
Yours is actually really good and I can tell you took some time into it.
I just think you could even make it a song with the lyrics saying "Oh" and "Nooo" I just imagined you singing those lol =]
Nice song bro, like the chorus and you've got talent. Keep it up!
You should read/sing this and put it on youtube
Those are really sweet and touching lyrics.
Nice one mate. sounds pretty kool.
wow this seems touching!
i would love to hear this outloud.
Pretty impressive mate,I think you have shared lot of thoughts and love, very nice.
Now only if you could sing this
