It's actually good. Needs more diversity though.
(05-17-2011, 10:20 AM)Invincible Wrote: [ -> ]I love the way you lie.
(05-17-2011, 05:49 AM)Telhast Wrote: [ -> ]Great poem. Perfectly rhymed with sleek verses.
@BlackChaos - BTW, hows your girlfriend ?
i am his Girlfriend Ujellybro?
<3
(05-17-2011, 02:48 PM)Deism Wrote: [ -> ]It's actually good. Needs more diversity though.
Thanks mate
If you want diversity, check out my other works.
great poem! this stuff is good!