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I tried to go to sleep yesterday,
But I couldn't. The thought of you kept me awake.
When I imagine us not being together, my heart aches.
Its like the world is shaken and you're my earthquake.

I wish I could turn the clock back,
Erase all the hurt and anger between us that has passed.
I wish I had stopped, I regret how I act,
But my love for you is stronger than the greatest heart attack.

Please accept this rose, for it can't replace you.
I'm sorry, sweetheart, lets start over anew.

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Author's Note: I wrote this short poem on request of a friend. I thought I would share it here as well

Do i need to say any thing? awesome poem as usual buddy.

Great Poem mate. The connection it has with the reader makes this a nice Poem to read

(05-07-2011, 10:07 PM)Invincible Wrote: [ -> ]Do i need to say any thing? awesome poem as usual buddy.

Thanks bro Means a lot to me.

(05-09-2011, 10:15 AM)Mark Webber Wrote: [ -> ]Great Poem mate. The connection it has with the reader makes this a nice Poem to read

Thanks mate
If you like this, you should check out some of my other work

(05-09-2011, 10:51 AM)BlackChaos Wrote: [ -> ]Thanks mate
If you like this, you should check out some of my other work

I've looked through some of the other ones too, they're impressive

I'll Post some Feedback on those Threads

(05-09-2011, 11:07 AM)Mark Webber Wrote: [ -> ]I've looked through some of the other ones too, they're impressive

I'll Post some Feedback on those Threads

Always welcome
I made a tutorial on Creative Writing too which has an index of my work at the end.

That's a nice poem bro, must of taken a lot of work to put into.

(05-09-2011, 12:33 PM)sp0rky Wrote: [ -> ]That's a nice poem bro, must of taken a lot of work to put into.

Thanks man
Yeah, it does take time. But its always worth it.

(05-09-2011, 12:40 PM)BlackChaos Wrote: [ -> ]Thanks man
Yeah, it does take time. But its always worth it.

Of course it is. I might just show it to my gf one day (lol I'll tell her you made it )

(05-09-2011, 12:57 PM)sp0rky Wrote: [ -> ]Of course it is. I might just show it to my gf one day (lol I'll tell her you made it )

You're more than welcome to share it with any one you want