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Poem #2 for me! I don't usually write poems but I like it, depending on feedback I may make more. Feedback?

War.
Glory and honor,
Pain and hunger.
Neither can be filled.
One side fights for the right,
The other fights for the grief.
There are no victors,
There are no survivors.
There are two sides to a war,
Both see themselves justified.
What about the middle?
Where do they go?
The truly innocent,
They suffer.
So this ends with a question,
Why?

-Ronald Munday

Keep it up Veryx. Another great poem!
You're pretty good with free verse poems, and I should know, seeing as its one of my favorite types of poems