Not sure if it goes here, but hey...Well its my current one. out of 10 please, all comments are excepted.
8/10 I like the render and blending, butt it looks a little sketchy around his/her mouth.
Thanks, yea my computer was lagging a bit so.... Thanks though!
looks nice, the part between the head and wing at the top looks a bit over blured but other than that tis good
8/10
(12-13-2010, 04:50 AM)Katz Wrote: [ -> ]looks nice, the part between the head and wing at the top looks a bit over blured but other than that tis good
8/10
Took the words right out of my mouth, same rating 8/10 good job
4/10
Blending really needs work.
Some parts of the face look really blurred, same with the hair.
The wings don't flow very well with the girl.
The text needs to be nearer to the focal point rather than being on its own. (You should only ever have 1 focal point and work everything around it).
Lighting and colours need work.
Keep trying though.
I would rate it about a 7/10, it looks good, just a bit basic.
Thanks for all the feedback, i am trying to improve.
Only that part on her face doesn't seem to good .
Besides that Love it ! 8/10 !
I like it but a bit smudged on the render.