11-21-2010, 06:15 PM
hey here is all the songs i have wrote in the last 2 months, C&C please and thanks. i am 14 and play mostly Metal / Death core,
punishment.
Betrayal
knockout
Reasons Unknown
War
Loner
Nightmare
punishment.
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OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
Fire raining from the sky
my mind dissolving
Whats going on?
whats happening?
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
You idiots!
You did this!
Its your fault!
Now you will be punished!
Fire raining from the sky
My mind dissolving
Whats going on
whats happening
You Fools!
What have you done?
You will be punished
The ground dissolving beneath you
Fall to your death!
This is a symbol
this is your punishment
Fall into the flames
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
The water steaming
Heating up
Burning for eternity
This is your punishment
You idiots!
You did this!
What now?
Whatr you gonna do?
Your death awaits you !
Fire raining from the sky
my mind dissolving
Whats going on?
whats happening?
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
You idiots!
You did this!
Its your fault!
Now you will be punished!
Fire raining from the sky
My mind dissolving
Whats going on
whats happening
You Fools!
What have you done?
You will be punished
The ground dissolving beneath you
Fall to your death!
This is a symbol
this is your punishment
Fall into the flames
This worlds done
Ever Changed
Folding in
Burning up
The water steaming
Heating up
Burning for eternity
This is your punishment
You idiots!
You did this!
What now?
Whatr you gonna do?
Your death awaits you !
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Your hero of so long
the inspiration of so many
how could you?
your betrayal caused so many pain
How could you do this?
how could you pull the trigger?
the smoking barrel in hand
how could you kill him?
your hero of so long
the inspiration of so many
A bullet in the back
your the cause
your the reason
your betrayal
your the reason
you pulled the trigger
the gun in hand
the smoking barrel
a bullet in the back
the legend of a generation
The smoking gun in hand
the hero of so many
shot in the back
your betrayal
the inspiration of so many
how could you?
your betrayal caused so many pain
How could you do this?
how could you pull the trigger?
the smoking barrel in hand
how could you kill him?
your hero of so long
the inspiration of so many
A bullet in the back
your the cause
your the reason
your betrayal
your the reason
you pulled the trigger
the gun in hand
the smoking barrel
a bullet in the back
the legend of a generation
The smoking gun in hand
the hero of so many
shot in the back
your betrayal
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your blood on the ground
your head on the floor
your reputation done
your gonna regret this
Your gone
no where to be seen
one of us i out
who will it be?
stepping out
preparing for the brawl
your time has come
your knocked out
everyone gathering around
placing there bets
its happening here and now
who's it going to be
who is it
who will step up
your last chance
your going down
one of us is done
one of us is gone
our reputation is finished
it happens here
your head on the floor
your reputation done
your gonna regret this
Your gone
no where to be seen
one of us i out
who will it be?
stepping out
preparing for the brawl
your time has come
your knocked out
everyone gathering around
placing there bets
its happening here and now
who's it going to be
who is it
who will step up
your last chance
your going down
one of us is done
one of us is gone
our reputation is finished
it happens here
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Your body laying cold
misunderstood personality
gone to reasons unknown
this must be a trick
the beat of your music
the greatest of your kind
the inspiration of us all
the musician of life
your energy shown
power in your beats
walking the streets
judged by your looks
misunderstood
this must be a trick
loved by so many
gone to reasons unknown
the inspiration of us all
the beat of life
your energy shown to all
walking the streets
judged by your looks
misunderstood
loved by so many
gone to reasons unknown
misunderstood personality
gone to reasons unknown
this must be a trick
the beat of your music
the greatest of your kind
the inspiration of us all
the musician of life
your energy shown
power in your beats
walking the streets
judged by your looks
misunderstood
this must be a trick
loved by so many
gone to reasons unknown
the inspiration of us all
the beat of life
your energy shown to all
walking the streets
judged by your looks
misunderstood
loved by so many
gone to reasons unknown
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family's left behind
troops out fighting
so you can live free
risking there life
the fight for your rights
they are risking there life
so you can have yours
this is a war for freedom
soldiers dieing
leaving there family's
your rights protected
because they risk there life
gun shots ringing
bullets flying
risking there life
for your right to live
war raging
people dieing
blame them
greedy ********
Sending your sons, daughters, brothers, sisters, mothers, fathers
to fight for greed
to fight for your rights
they risk there life
fighting in all directions never knowing
whats around every corner
loved one's not knowing
if they are coming back
family's left for months
to risk there life
in a war for greed
in a war for freedom
troops out fighting
so you can live free
risking there life
the fight for your rights
they are risking there life
so you can have yours
this is a war for freedom
soldiers dieing
leaving there family's
your rights protected
because they risk there life
gun shots ringing
bullets flying
risking there life
for your right to live
war raging
people dieing
blame them
greedy ********
Sending your sons, daughters, brothers, sisters, mothers, fathers
to fight for greed
to fight for your rights
they risk there life
fighting in all directions never knowing
whats around every corner
loved one's not knowing
if they are coming back
family's left for months
to risk there life
in a war for greed
in a war for freedom
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Always Quiet
hiding in the shadows
always out to the side
never in the crowd
today is his day
to show himself
to stop being a loner
no one sees him there
never notices him
hes different
hes quiet
today is his day
to prove himself
to not be a loner
always quiet
always hiding in the shadows
never seen
never heard
today is his day
to prove himself
to show who he is
to show what he can do
he will be heard
people will see him
he will no longer be a
loner
hiding in the shadows
always out to the side
never in the crowd
today is his day
to show himself
to stop being a loner
no one sees him there
never notices him
hes different
hes quiet
today is his day
to prove himself
to not be a loner
always quiet
always hiding in the shadows
never seen
never heard
today is his day
to prove himself
to show who he is
to show what he can do
he will be heard
people will see him
he will no longer be a
loner
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Hidden in your mind
your fears everywhere
battling to take over
This is a nightmare
Ready to take over your thoughts
hidden in your mind
your greatest fears
fighting against you
demons of your mind
confronting you
always there
showing themselves in your sleep
Hidden
waiting for you to sleep
plotting there attack
preparing to take over
confront them
show them you aren't afraid
prove can conquer them
END THIS!
hidden in your mind
your fears everywhere
battling to take over
this is your nightmare
Hidden
waiting for you to sleep
plotting there attack
preparing to take over
Be prepared
attack back
destroy them
end this
END this ******* nightmare!!
your fears everywhere
battling to take over
This is a nightmare
Ready to take over your thoughts
hidden in your mind
your greatest fears
fighting against you
demons of your mind
confronting you
always there
showing themselves in your sleep
Hidden
waiting for you to sleep
plotting there attack
preparing to take over
confront them
show them you aren't afraid
prove can conquer them
END THIS!
hidden in your mind
your fears everywhere
battling to take over
this is your nightmare
Hidden
waiting for you to sleep
plotting there attack
preparing to take over
Be prepared
attack back
destroy them
end this
END this ******* nightmare!!