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Vivacious muse of feeling
and thought, draw close
I long to hear
how I shall of mere
words, sum meaning

to elicit his smile
to warm his morning.

Neither glitter nor guile,
nor sweet artifice
will suffice. But a clear
vial of captive prose
with the sweet knowing:
he is to me dear.

I love reading this, your cute words make me smile.

Wow, * He says stammering and stuttering* At first I found it hard to see the meaning and the devices used but it's really nice Eve. About anyone in particular?

(10-27-2010, 03:58 AM)Sam Wrote: [ -> ]Wow, * He says stammering and stuttering* At first I found it hard to see the meaning and the devices used but it's really nice Eve. About anyone in particular?

Thank you, Sam. It is for Jay.

(: Do you actually know each other? I've noticed there's something going on

(10-27-2010, 04:08 AM)Sam Wrote: [ -> ](: Do you actually know each other? I've noticed there's something going on

She is my lover, I am her lover.

My next poem has been started, and will be even cuter. You'll see!

I am absolutely terrible at understanding poetry. Dr. Seuss is a different story.