Feel free to give me your criticism. ^^
Nicely positioned, although the colours seem over-contrasted. The background and font work well.
As Eve says, the colours look over contrasted however I do like your work. Keep it up sir.
It looks unfinished, the background needs more done to it.
Move the font higher up and more to the left.
I like it but needs work done. Has some potential.
render the contrastion to the color of the image & backgorund.
The right hand side really needs some work, it looks great otherwise.