Added some sharpening and colored the person.
other text.
Looking better like this. Some things:
Her body is over the border. She is missing her left arm and the C4D to the left cuts off really weird.
(10-05-2010, 12:43 PM)Happeh Wrote: [ -> ]Looking better like this. Some things:
Her body is over the border. She is missing her left arm and the C4D to the left cuts off really weird.
Her left arm is there, and fixed the border.
Must look wierd because of the C4D then. xD
Watch the "R" on the text, just slightly cut off.
Your getting there though.
The C4D was kind of funky.. thanks for the C&C.
I think that looks great. I'm no expert but i know's what i like's.
Delete the text and change the colour scheme it doesn't suit.
Try a different font style. On #2 the r is cut off but if I had to choose, I'd pick number one.
cartoon render doesnt look good with such a realisit bg
c4ds are random
has no flow
text is bad
lighting needs work