C&C Please guys
Render and C4Ds look really out of place. You're making progress, but you've got a long way to go. :3 If you want I can lend you some of my tutorials. I think I posted a few on DF if you want to have a look there.
I can't cope with TuTs. I think I've read about one. Ever.
I think it needs a different font. That one looks too small and hard to read.
Don't like it sorry.
I recommend you not doing text because you never make it work.
Maybe make a signature and request examples of text others would put on it, then you may learn better.
The c4d stuff doesn't blend in at all with the render.