The first thing I noticed it's that it seems... well, unreal. After watching closely I realized it's because you removed almost all the shadows on her face and the whole piece is a little blured.
Remember to select the section to colour first with a selection tool, otherwise you'll get color leaking out of place:
And the eyebrows are too blond
Is this your first colouring? Seems like a fun thing to do, I haven't try it myself. How long did it take you?
Keep it up, Rob.
Yeah doesn't look real.
You can see lots of yellow tones on her skin (fingers, bottom of chin and along the edges of her head).
I think you should of made the hair plain blonde instead of yellowy blonde.
Also the eyes look messed up.
None the less good effort.
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