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C&C please!

I don't like having two focal points: the house and the girl. It just seems that you threw some C4Ds and the girl render in there, along with some text.

I'm not a fan, sorry. I've seen better from you.

(09-30-2010, 08:25 PM)NEC Wrote: [ -> ]I don't like having two focal points: the house and the girl. It just seems that you threw some C4Ds and the girl render in there, along with some text.

I'm not a fan, sorry. I've seen better from you.

i am going to have to say that i disagree with you, i think that it looks really good, and the main focul point (the girl) is alot stronger then the house. good job

Take out the render and it would look much better.
Also the dots don't really suit.
All I can think of right now that instead of having that render maybe put like some wolves in the background, not sure what else could fit.

I like it, appears as if she is dreaming of the shack.