my first lp in a while (2nd in all)
![[Image: thechase.jpg]](http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz84/bkotz1991/Photoshop%20work/thechase.jpg)
![[Image: thechase2.jpg]](http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz84/bkotz1991/Photoshop%20work/thechase2.jpg)
watchu think?
update:
![[Image: thechase4.jpg]](http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz84/bkotz1991/Photoshop%20work/thechase4.jpg)
The reflective splinters are great - they provide a real sense of movement. Render works well with the background. Too many light sources - light should be mostly on the right of the piece.
Text position and font are perfect, though text size can be smaller.
Good job overall!
9/10 overall, the explosion effect, looks really good! I also like the ground, how it like splits up.
I agree with Eve about the reflective splinters and the light source, although I don't really like the text, the font or the color.
8/10
i think i f'd up the colors on this one:
Nice work man, looks really good and it's pretty unique as well. I'll give it a 9/10 as well. Keep it up man. Great picture, this could be used great as a signature if you decided to make it smaller. 
8/10. Overall I think it really has potential. Heres a few pros and cons..
Pros:
- Positioning of the render.
- Shatter effect fits well with the theme.
- Colour theme looks really professional.
- Blending is fairly good.
- Overall is a really interesting piece to look at.
Cons:
- Text should be removed. Either that or you should create 3D text which will match the whole image. (Maybe adding a shatter effect).
- Background is far to bright.
- Try and make the render jump out a bit more. The image seems a bit flat.
Good work though keep it up mate.
updated: hopfully looks little better
I love the last updated one, looks great. The second one doesn't look so well. First one is pretty good also.
I think you're doing a great job. So far everything you're doing is working well imho. I'm at a loss on how to improve it.