latest:
rate it
All the reds makes it a bit too dark on the eyes. Not sure about the mixture of colours but it does like quite impressive and ten times better than anything I could do.
7/10
Too dark and text doesn't fit. From what I can see, though, it is good work. 7/10.
any tips on the text?
it still my weakest subject
For the text I'd probably use that orangish color from the speakers and use a simple gradient.
The sig is too dark and it's hard to tell what I'm looking at.
The position of the text is fine, also the italic. Colour needs to be simpler (use Nemmyy's advice) and you can also use a font that is less thick. Keep the outline.
It is better if the signature was brighter, and the text worked on after. Overall, you have improved a lot.
The sig is actually pretty good. But the text really does ruin it. You should choose a different font & colour.
7/10
update:
the person didnt like it so im claiming it as my own
Edit: anyone ever notice photoshop changes tints?
The font doesn't fit in, other then that, I think the first one was better. I liked the darkness. 8/10 to the first one.