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Hatrid

Antipathy is all around,
In our hearts and deep inside our soul.
That one man you look to in disgust;
Your self proclaimed enemy.

No matter the color,
We're all parallel.
We're not going anywhere;
If one part of the orb falls,
We all fall with it.

This hatrid is pointless;
Why not coalesce?
It will never end,
Unless we make an effort.

I did a "Hatrid Ex" one, but this is just about hatrid. Enjoy.

Hey Yin I know something that would make this so much better and that is: if you would read it to us lol that would be sweet ,no but good one thanks for the read!

Wow, that's good. It flows really well, I like it. Thanks for the share.

Wow this is really good how long did it take for you to do?

Took me like a good 30 minutes or so.

FYI it is spelled hatred, not sure if that's on purpose or not.

Well done. A plus is that it flows really well.

O_O!?... Wow, That was actually awesome o_O!

Another good poem from Yin! Thanks for that share, I enjoyed it.

I read your poem out loud, it just sounds so smooth!