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It's good, but nothing special.
I like this man! Really cool, well done.
I think it's hard to judge the quality without being able to hear it.
(08-01-2010, 04:28 PM)Sam Wrote: [ -> ]I think it's hard to judge the quality without being able to hear it.

I second the motion, however I still like the lyrics.
It's rather short, and there are some lines that are kind of amateur sounding.
More specifically-
"You messin with my emotions makes me go insane
Wish I could use magic and float away like david blaine"

It needs some work, and needs more cleverness in it. Clever rhymes are what make memorable raps.
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