Too cluttered and red. The text color doesn't fit in.
6/10
That looks so cute.
I'd rate it 8/10 for it cuteness...
I like this one more than some of the other ones you've posted.
It has some good colors, and a clear focal, but there's a few to many C4Ds.
I'm also not sure about the dimensions, but that's not a big thing.
Render looks LQ to me otherwise it's pretty good.
9/10