The erasing is a little bit poor, but I actually really like it. Did you follow a tutorial? Second is better btw.
First of lol at your -2 posts rayne.
I make text signatures and have been doing graphics for 2 years and your first attempt was much better than your second one.
In your second one the reflaction is way to bright and the red doesn't go well with the blue text.
The only thing the second one is better in is, the line when going behind the text hasn't gots parts going over the text too.
It's quite overdone, actually.
Text with a pentool line through it, not really original.
I do like that you added little dots though.
Not bad. I think the light blue is toooooo light loll. Good job though
Only complaint is all the letters look the same
Second attempt looks better I like the sprinkles by the pen line.