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Short Story I'm Working On
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08-18-2010, 12:48 PM (This post was last modified: 08-18-2010, 11:28 PM by Taniel.)
Well, I started writing a story a while back. Then my girlfriend gave me a great idea and we worked on it together. The idea was that we tell the story from the POV of the boy and the girl. She writes for the girl and I write for the boy. Unfortunately, we have writer's block and can't think of anything else to write. There are a lot of spelling mistakes because we type fast and then go back to correct them. I haven't gone back to correct most of them because I've been busy. Also, near the end I got lazy and stopped spacing the paragraphs out.

It is approximately 106 pages but I want to make it more. It's just a simple teenage love story with some twists and turns in it that threaten the couple's relationship. It starts off with the POV of the girl.

Here is a download if you guys want to read it and give me any ideas.

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08-18-2010, 02:57 PM
Post the whole thing here in spoiler tags.
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08-18-2010, 03:08 PM
(08-18-2010, 02:57 PM)Eve Wrote: Post the whole thing here in spoiler tags.

Err, I'm not quite sure you understand...It's 106 pages....I doubt that would fit in here....There are 218063 characters in total. Would that even fit in a post? O.O
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08-18-2010, 03:23 PM
218063 characters.. make it a PDF.
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08-18-2010, 03:30 PM (This post was last modified: 08-18-2010, 03:32 PM by Taniel.)
(08-18-2010, 03:23 PM)Eve Wrote: 218063 characters.. make it a PDF.

Hahaha, very well. Converting now. Upload link will be up in a few.

EDIT: PDF file added. Please read and comment/rate. Smile
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08-19-2010, 10:04 AM
Can you also upload it as an RTF or TXT?
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08-19-2010, 10:08 AM
(08-19-2010, 10:04 AM)Shades Wrote: Can you also upload it as an RTF or TXT?

Errr, I don't know. I just realized it was stupid of me to upload as .DOC because I don't want people taking my story. Unsure
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