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Short Story I'm Working On
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Well, I started writing a story a while back. Then my girlfriend gave me a great idea and we worked on it together. The idea was that we tell the story from the POV of the boy and the girl. She writes for the girl and I write for the boy. Unfortunately, we have writer's block and can't think of anything else to write. There are a lot of spelling mistakes because we type fast and then go back to correct them. I haven't gone back to correct most of them because I've been busy. Also, near the end I got lazy and stopped spacing the paragraphs out.

It is approximately 106 pages but I want to make it more. It's just a simple teenage love story with some twists and turns in it that threaten the couple's relationship. It starts off with the POV of the girl.

Here is a download if you guys want to read it and give me any ideas.

Story.pdf
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Messages In This Thread
Short Story I'm Working On - by Taniel - 08-18-2010, 12:48 PM
RE: Short Story I'm Working On - by Eve - 08-18-2010, 02:57 PM
RE: Short Story I'm Working On - by Taniel - 08-18-2010, 03:08 PM
RE: Short Story I'm Working On - by Eve - 08-18-2010, 03:23 PM
RE: Short Story I'm Working On - by Taniel - 08-18-2010, 03:30 PM
RE: Short Story I'm Working On - by Shades - 08-19-2010, 10:04 AM
RE: Short Story I'm Working On - by Taniel - 08-19-2010, 10:08 AM

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